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PostSubject: Shūjì, the cabbage vender   Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:25 am

Basic Character Information:

Name:Shūjì
Age:18
Gender:Male

Looks:Shūjì is average height with long black hair that often covers his eyes so he can have a very ominous look to conceal his intentions. He is fair skin like most Asians but he has various scars tattered across his face from childhood journeys and encounters with the various wildlife of the Earth Nation. Shūjì has slouched shoulders because he is so relaxed and content with life unlike most Earthbenders, even the trainees.
He has an athletic build without being overly muscular. He has a circular burn mark on the back of his head that was acquired in a later story. (There shall be a picture coming soon)

Personality: Shūjì is very trusting in anyone that confronts him which is what prompted him to be a cabbage vender. He is very Charismatic and can get a sell under any circumstances. He is also a hopeless romantic and falls in love continuously with female customers, but he also hates being tied down. He also has an intense friendship with his friends/followers


Rank Information:

Rank:/b]Earth
[b]Nation:
Earth
Organization:
Bending Element: Earth
Specialty:Athlete

Skill Information:


Special Characteristics:


Name:
Range:
Description: .


Techniques:


Name: Southern Praying Mantis
Rank: Civilian
Element: Earth
Range: 10 to 20 meters
Description: Makes Shūjì light on his feet unlike any usual Earthbender, which in turn makes his Earthbending weaker than others because he is less in touch with the ground as other Earthbenders.


Specialty skills:


Name: Earth Lung
Specialty: For Earthbenders only
Ability:Enables user to breathe in large amounts of sut, dirt, dust, and smoke, caused by Earthbending in closed locations such as tunnelling or mining or even smoke screens caused by a sudden bending of land around them.



Pet/Animal:


Type: Closed
Name: Hùnhé
Species: Gorilla Dog
Element: N/A
Appearance: Hùnhé appears as a giant golden retriever (about 1.5x the height and weight of a normal human) except completely black with a grey spot on the back of his head. But unlike a dog he has opposable thumbs which (obviously) allows him to pick things up with his paws..
Description: Hùnhé is passive and refuses to pick up civilized weapons such as swords, daggers, spears etc. But he will pick up rocks or boulders to throw and possibly disable. He is very lovable and always tries to make friends just like his master
Special Abilities: Blood Howl, Hùnhé aims his mouth in a certain direction and howls it slows or disables that person or thing
Origin: Shūjì was once travelling in the forest as a child and discovered a deep cave that he had not explored yet. So he ventured in, leaded by childhood curiosity. As he got deeper into the cave he noticed a flicker of light that fluctuated on and off. When he got close enough to see what was happening he noticed a man in all black shooting fire at helpless gorilla dog pups with the mother off at the back of the cave completely burned to death. Shūjì slowly moved up to sneak on the man shooting fire, then the man suddenly darted his vision toward Shūjì and grabbed him by the hair and turn him around as if to teach Shūjì a lesson. Shūjì was terrified for his life when he suddenly felt immense pain on the back of his head. The man said “Now you will remember” and ran out of the cave. Shūjì fell to his knees crying from the pain, hearing the pitter patter of some of the pups running in terror from the scene, when he felt a wet sloppy wet tongue rub against his face. When Shūjì looked up it was one of the pups that survived. Shūjì noticed the pup had a burn on the back of its head just as he had just received, Shūjì believed in fate and this was no exception. Shūjì named him Hùnhé, because he looked like a hybrid of two animals Shūjì had once seen.

Weapons:


Name:
Appearance:
Range:
Rank:
Special Abilities:
Origin:

History and RP Sample:
History: Shūjì was born in the autumn to only his mom, since his dad had hours before his birth, which had induced the birth upon his mom. His dad died from a random act of hatred from a firebender. His dad, Fùqīn, was a very peaceful worker for one of the mines in the Earth Nation. Since neither his mom or dad could Earthbend, Shūjì had no natural talent for Earthbending. Only having his mom to teach him the ways of the world he learned a more accepting lifestyle, so he grew no hatred for the Fire Nation that had so many negative encounters with him. Shūjì’s mom was extremely surprised to see one day in his youth he brought home a Gorilla Pup, possibly the rarest animal in all 4 of the nations. But she was accepting and allowed him to keep the animal which was helpful and nice to her, seeing as Hùnhé noticed the relationship between Shūjì and his mom, whose name is Mǔqīn. The years progressed peacefully in their house, with the many occurrences where Shūjì wud come home batter and his mom would patch him up and Hùnhé would be smiling as if nothing were wrong. One day, although, Shūjì grew tired of his small village and needed to see the world. So he took up being a cabbage vender to trek the Earth Nation


Rp Sample:
"Are you going to tell me or just slice away?" said the man. "I believe you deserve an explanation, for what I am about to do to you will need an explanation." said Alighieri as he sat down putting his face in his hands.

"I don't remember much being a human. But as I died I remember hearing this voice. It was an eerie voice. The sound of this voice was etched into my very soul. 'Your the one, you will decide the fate of millions. But first I must alter your very soul. You will be intertwined with a soul of pure evil.' Then my thoughts became dark, my mind became pure black, and my soul...my soul was carved anew. Into an unbreakable force. It was never the same. 'It is done' said the demonic voice 'you are mine to control no matter what time or what, you will be mine. For now, though, you will need time to rest. Time to heal.' Time flew by I "rested" and by the time I woke up everything had changed. I assumed the voice was just a dream of mind while I slept. But I was wrong he was there he told me I must kill for him. Kill for my life back. Then he was gone. He left me alone in a world similar to this. A world that was to easy for me. But I was lifeless on the inside. The voice never came back until it said 'You are once again the chosen. Come with me...' Then a shadowy figure appeared and gestured me over to it. I reached for it's hand. Then I got the feeling of falling. This was scary because I had not felt any feeling in a long time. Then, I was here my weapons had be downgraded and I heard the voice once again. It said 'YOU WILL GATHER SOULS OF THE STRONGEST WARRIORS. I will guide you to them all. This world will be ours through you.'

"That is an interesting story. But i hear the same voices. They told me I was needed no longer and I would be disposed of..." said the man.

"And that is why I'm here." said Alighieri as he reached for his spear and stabbed it through the man's stomach. Alighieri felt the man's spine crack in half and he looked down and said "Your going to be added to me. TO OUR FORCE."

Alighieri snapped the man's head off and began to feast...
-From Imythess, my reaper character.
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PostSubject: Re: Shūjì, the cabbage vender   Sat Apr 21, 2012 8:30 pm

ok to start this off

first
add a paragraph to personality.

second
you automatically get two special characteristics from here
http://avatarp.forumotion.com/t2-nation-special-characteristics
and if you dont want any more after that, that is your own choice

third
Quote :

Name: Earth Lung
Specialty: For Earthbenders only
Ability:Enables user to breathe in large amounts of sut, dirt, dust, and smoke, caused by Earthbending in closed locations such as tunnelling or mining or even smoke screens caused by a sudden bending of land around them.

this does not exist as a specialty
you can find specialties here and you may choose one of them and have a skill that would fall into that category
http://avatarp.forumotion.com/t11-specialtys

fourth
add a bit more to your history and split it into arcs
for example, a birth arc, teenage years arc, etc

after your revisions i shall check again
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PostSubject: Once again   Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:06 pm

Basic Character Information:

Name:Shūjì
Age:18
Gender:Male

Looks:Shūjì is average height with long black hair that often covers his eyes so he can have a very ominous look to conceal his intentions. He is fair skin like most Asians but he has various scars tattered across his face from childhood journeys and encounters with the various wildlife of the Earth Nation. Shūjì has slouched shoulders because he is so relaxed and content with life unlike most Earthbenders, even the trainees.
He has an athletic build without being overly muscular. He has a circular burn mark on the back of his head that was acquired in a later story. (There shall be a picture coming soon)

Personality: Shūjì is very trusting in anyone that confronts him which is what prompted him to be a cabbage vender. He is very Charismatic and can get a sell under any circumstances. He is also a hopeless romantic and falls in love continuously with female customers, but he also hates being tied down. He also has an intense friendship with his friends/followers. He also is not as stubborn as most Earthbenders.
Shūjì has somewhat of a sadistic streak since when he was young he would capture small animals and torture them. He loves having people’s lives in his hands, during certain points in his life. Almost as if he has more than one personality, or bipolar disorder.
So to recap Shūjì has a very cheerful, almost manically cheerful side, and a depressive, psychotic side. Which he is not aware of...


Rank Information:

RankEarth
Nation:Earth
Organization:
Bending Element: Earth
Specialty:Athlete

Skill Information:


Special Characteristics:


Name: Rough Hide
Nation: Earth
Description: Residents of Earth nation have strong stone like skin. They can take small blows like cuts and light attacks. They are not resistant to pain and can still take damage, however weak blows from punches, kicks or small weapons have less of an effect on their flesh.

Techniques:


Name: Southern Praying Mantis
Rank: Civilian
Element: Earth
Range: N/A
Description: Makes Shūjì light on his feet unlike any usual Earthbender, which in turn makes his Earthbending weaker than others because he is less in touch with the ground as other Earthbenders.


Specialty skills:


Name: Speedster
Specialty: Athlete
Ability: Shūjì can run in great bursts of speed to get away from enemies or to hunt down prey. He can double the speed he runs for about 50 meters.

Name: Free Runner
Specialty: Athlete
Ability: Shūjì can run through, jump, and climb over obstacles quickly due to his time running from animals too big for him to fight. (Parkour if I'm too vague...Ryder)

Name: Hand to hand
Specialty: Athlete
Ability: Shūjì can fight without a weapon or bending due to his years of not having weapons or bending in his life and continuously fighting with wild animals. He punches, kicks, and dodges quickly.



Pet/Animal:


Type: Closed
Name: Hùnhé
Species: Gorilla Dog
Element: N/A
Appearance: Hùnhé appears as a giant golden retriever (about 1.5x the height and weight of a normal human) except completely black with a grey spot on the back of his head. But unlike a dog he has opposable thumbs which (obviously) allows him to pick things up with his paws..
Description: Hùnhé is passive and refuses to pick up civilized weapons such as swords, daggers, spears etc. But he will pick up rocks or boulders to throw and possibly disable. He is very lovable and always tries to make friends just like his master
Special Abilities: Blood Howl, Hùnhé aims his mouth in a certain direction and howls it slows or disables that person or thing
Origin: Shūjì was once travelling in the forest as a child and discovered a deep cave that he had not explored yet. So he ventured in, leaded by childhood curiosity. As he got deeper into the cave he noticed a flicker of light that fluctuated on and off. When he got close enough to see what was happening he noticed a man in all black shooting fire at helpless gorilla dog pups with the mother off at the back of the cave completely burned to death. Shūjì slowly moved up to sneak on the man shooting fire, then the man suddenly darted his vision toward Shūjì and grabbed him by the hair and turn him around as if to teach Shūjì a lesson. Shūjì was terrified for his life when he suddenly felt immense pain on the back of his head. The man said “Now you will remember” and ran out of the cave. Shūjì fell to his knees crying from the pain, hearing the pitter patter of some of the pups running in terror from the scene, when he felt a wet sloppy wet tongue rub against his face. When Shūjì looked up it was one of the pups that survived. Shūjì noticed the pup had a burn on the back of its head just as he had just received, Shūjì believed in fate and this was no exception. Shūjì named him Hùnhé, because he looked like a hybrid of two animals Shūjì had once seen.

Weapons:


Name:
Appearance:
Range:
Rank:
Special Abilities:
Origin:

History and RP Sample:
History:
Early Life
Shūjì was born in the autumn to only his mom, since his dad had hours before his birth, which had induced the birth upon his mom. His dad died from a random act of hatred from a firebender. His dad, Fùqīn, was a very peaceful worker for one of the mines in the Earth Nation. Since neither his mom or dad could Earthbend, Shūjì had no natural talent for Earthbending. Only having his mom to teach him the ways of the world he learned a more accepting lifestyle, so he grew no hatred for the Fire Nation that had so many negative encounters with him. Shūjì’s mom was extremely surprised to see one day in his youth he brought home a Gorilla Pup, possibly the rarest animal in all 4 of the nations. But she was accepting and allowed him to keep the animal which was helpful and nice to her, seeing as Hùnhé noticed the relationship between Shūjì and his mom, whose name is Mǔqīn.
Teenage Years
The years progressed peacefully in their house, with the many occurrences where Shūjì wud come home batter and his mom would patch him up and Hùnhé would be smiling as if nothing were wrong. One day, although, Shūjì grew tired of his small village and needed to see the world. So he took up being a cabbage vender to trek the Earth Nation. And so his story begins...


Rp Sample:
"Are you going to tell me or just slice away?" said the man. "I believe you deserve an explanation, for what I am about to do to you will need an explanation." said Alighieri as he sat down putting his face in his hands.

"I don't remember much being a human. But as I died I remember hearing this voice. It was an eerie voice. The sound of this voice was etched into my very soul. 'Your the one, you will decide the fate of millions. But first I must alter your very soul. You will be intertwined with a soul of pure evil.' Then my thoughts became dark, my mind became pure black, and my soul...my soul was carved anew. Into an unbreakable force. It was never the same. 'It is done' said the demonic voice 'you are mine to control no matter what time or what, you will be mine. For now, though, you will need time to rest. Time to heal.' Time flew by I "rested" and by the time I woke up everything had changed. I assumed the voice was just a dream of mind while I slept. But I was wrong he was there he told me I must kill for him. Kill for my life back. Then he was gone. He left me alone in a world similar to this. A world that was to easy for me. But I was lifeless on the inside. The voice never came back until it said 'You are once again the chosen. Come with me...' Then a shadowy figure appeared and gestured me over to it. I reached for it's hand. Then I got the feeling of falling. This was scary because I had not felt any feeling in a long time. Then, I was here my weapons had be downgraded and I heard the voice once again. It said 'YOU WILL GATHER SOULS OF THE STRONGEST WARRIORS. I will guide you to them all. This world will be ours through you.'

"That is an interesting story. But i hear the same voices. They told me I was needed no longer and I would be disposed of..." said the man.

"And that is why I'm here." said Alighieri as he reached for his spear and stabbed it through the man's stomach. Alighieri felt the man's spine crack in half and he looked down and said "Your going to be added to me. TO OUR FORCE."

Alighieri snapped the man's head off and began to feast...
-From Imythess, my reaper character.


Last edited by Dominique Jones on Sun Apr 22, 2012 1:10 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : bc i suck at RPing)
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PostSubject: Re: Shūjì, the cabbage vender   Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:09 pm

ok again to start things off

first
you only get one Specialty Skill for benders (For you a future bender)

second
fix the coding in the specialty skills and rank information

third
there was no need to repost, just edit bro

after this you should be good
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PostSubject: Re: Shūjì, the cabbage vender   Sun Apr 22, 2012 1:14 am

alright after many times of editing and possibly frustration


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