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The four nations: Water, Earth, Fire, and Air. Come join and start your own journey as a bender, weapon user, or a common cabbage vendor. Welcome to Avatar RPG!
Name: Hajime II, Saito Age: 23 Gender: Male Looks:
Saito is not the tallest of males, but neither the shortest. He is about five feet eight inches and only weighs around one hundred and forty eight pounds. It is typical of most Airbender’s to have this lithe and small form so that they can move deftly about their adversaries. While he lacks brute force, he makes up for it in speed. Saito is perhaps one of the most unorthodox air monks in the nation’s history, in appearance and personality. Saito does not have the standard Air Nation tattoo, nor does he have a shaved head. Instead his head is full of hair, and what makes it more unusual is the color. It is violet, but almost red in color. It hangs about his face, but most of it is kept up in a pony tail. Instead of the ponytail remaining behind his head, it usually is set in front of the left shoulder. Saito views the world through very vividly colored eyes, being the same color as his hair, it is hard to forget them, especially given the fact that his gaze is rather intense To go even further against Air Nation traditions, Saito does not wear the Air Nation garb. Instead he wears clothing more suited to a Ronin. Saito wears a black robe that has white sash around the waist with sandals and a white scarf. All of his clothing in their entirety is made of the thinnest and lightest material possible. This is so that he can maintain proper public appearance, while being unencumbered by his clothing. In accordance with his unorthodox attire, he also carries weapons that are not typically used by Airbenders. At the right side of his waist there are two weapons that are kept in place by his sash. These weapons are the Akatsuki, and the Shinkirou. They are both blades of varying length, the Akatsuki being the longer of the two. The Akatsuki is a Katana measuring in length at 70.6 centimeters, while the Shinkirou is a Wakizashi with a total length of 55.2 centimeters. Like many Airbenders, Saito also has a glider staff that typically in his hand, but sometimes he is forced to put it down.
Personality:
Saito is a very dignified and prudent young man, always seeking to settle affairs with diplomacy rather than violence. He is very open-minded and likes to listen to everyone’s point of view, weighing them each equally without prejudice. This is not to say that he does not have an opinion, but that he has learned toleration and temperance in everything he does. Saito is very articulate, able to get his point across without much confusion; some would even go as far to say that he has a silver tongue. It is very odd for such a young man to be so calm, some even believe that Saito is not even human. He possesses amazing restraint and resilience to belligerence, and when trying to enrage him it is equal to bringing an unstoppable force against an immovable object, neigh impossible. Saito is a keen and vigilant man, seeing with more intensity than it appears, for his expression plays tricks upon the mind. People think him to be a kind and pleasant man, but he is in reality a hawk in nature. Everything that people see is a lie, because his true nature is not that of the owl, but the fox. As a liar people inherently believe him to be evil, but this is far from the truth. Saito holds a high regard for all life, and does not ever wish to kill or harm anyone, but as a leader of a nation he cannot afford to live by his ideals. Understanding that reality is what makes him even more the wiser. So unlike his predecessors, Saito is willing to kill another individual, though he will pursue every other logical option before he does so. In regards to those who are in his inner circle, or in the process of getting there, Saito is a totally different man. Not in the sense that he has lost his wisdom or his ability to remain calm, but that he is a man of fire. Of course not literally, but due to the fact that his mom was a Firebender, he has an innate pride within him. Saito’s passion and drive is very intense. It has been known to get him in to trouble in the past, and as such he has a small reputation among his people. This means that some begin to understand that Saito is not who he pretends. So in the rare event that his emotions get the better of him, you may think him a Firebender. Because at times he is quick to act and brutal when it comes to combat, as well as being very proud, especially when his Nation is concerned.
The Darker Half:
Rank Information:
Rank: Lord Nation: Air Organization: None Bending Element(s):
Main: Air Advancement(s): Sound, Void
Specialty: Tactician
Skill Information:
Special Characteristics:
Name: Endless breath Nation: Air Description:
Residents of the air nation have large lung capacities and are able to hold their breath for extremely long times. They can breath in rough weather like sandstorms smoke and ash, and are very good and holding their breath.
Name: Perfect Aim Nation: Air Description:
Residents of the air nation have extremely accurate aim, they can locate and pin point things quickly and accurately, and almost never miss their target. They are the best marksmen out there.
Saito is a very skilled user of swords and blades of any form, but mostly his skill is with the use of the Katana, and the Wakizashi. His skill is great in the sense that compared to most people he is able to perceive the blade's movement, and react to it in seemingly seamless motions. Nothing is wasted, and all movements are necessary. It is the perfect style for an Airbender who has an abundance of energy to practice a style were controlling the use of energy is paramount. This trait, once activated, lasts for five user posts. Then after those five user posts movement is slightly decreased, and then there is a cooldown period of three user posts before it can be used again.
Name: Master of the Void Range: Self-6 Meter Radius Description:
Like msny benders of this rank Saito has managed to master an advanced element. However instead of mastering Sound he choose to master the Void, which is the ability to remove air from a section of space. Because he focused more primarily upon using the Void over sound, his skill in manipulating sound is only at a Captain level, instead of a Lord's level. Instead of a 3 Meter Radius, Saito is able to manipulate it at a greater 6 Meter Radius. Also, being a master also allows him to shorten the range so that he can micro manage the lack of oxygen at the lowest level. An example would be creating a "void" of oxygen around his blade, or even within his palm.
Name: Quick Reactions Range: Self Description:
Like most people in this day and age, Saito also has quick reactions, those above the average and even above those who are considered good. It was obvious enough that in order to stay alive and to stay a leader he would have to keep up with everyone else. Though..much of this is due to his being an Airbender. As such, his speed and reaction time are on a high level, especially since his movements are enhanced by his airbending. One of the ways he has increased his speed is to improve his aerodynamics, manipulating the way the wind moves against his body. This does not make him impossible to catch or fight, he's just really illusive. This lasts for three user posts, and must be cooled down for five user posts. User movement is not slowed by this, just that the ability to perceive movement is no longer as great.
Name: The Slicing Wind Range: Air Being Controlled Description:
Saito is a master airbender, and as such he has developed many ways to make the air his weapon. One of his most defining methods is to give the wind a razor like quality, which allows the wind he controls to cut through objects. Of course, thicker and stronger objects take up more of his energy..the same goes for how long it takes to build up the energy to cut a stronger object.. but as far as human skin goes, the wind cuts through it like a hot knife through butter.
Name: Foresight Range: Eyesight;Close Combat Description: The skill foresight is based upon constant observations, meaning that the user of this skill must first observe a person, or persons in order to use this ability. The ability is to "see in the future", which really means that it appears that the user is able to do this. In reality that is not the truth. What is actually occurring is that based upon careful observation of an opponent's body the user of this skill has the ability to gauge the possibility of that person using a move. This is done by studying the muscle movements. In order to do this, the user must first observe an opponent for four user posts. Then it can only be used for one user post. Then after it is used it cannot be used again against the same opponent(during that topic/timeline). It can be used against other people in the same topic, but must follow all of the rules. It can be used against two people at a time. During the observations the user is not permitted to attack, only defend until the observations are complete for the counter attack. If the user attacks during the observation process, then the user must start over.
Techniques:
Name:General Air Manipulation Rank: Recruit-Lord Element: Air Range: 10-50 meters Description:
From the rank of Recruit, all the way to the rank of Avatar, the abilities of an Air bender are almost infinite. Manipulating the element of Air is all in the mind of the bender.
Name: The Wind Dance Rank:Captain -Lord Element: Air Range: 1M - Captain; 3M - General; Lord - 10M Description:
Saito created this move in order to dodge attacks in a seemingly effortless manner. What occurs is that the user abides the the principles of Airbending, which is to become one with the surroundings. The user forgets about getting through an attack, but rather becoming one with the attack and dodging it simply because the path is predicted. The path is predicted because the user of this technique becomes one with their surroundings and reaches an inner peace. Aside from the philosophy of the move, it is essentially using airbending to alter the wind resistance around the body to either increase speed or reduce it to ones benefit, while moving the body in the proper way to avoid attacks. The speed varies upon the level used.
Captain - 30mph Max General - 50mph Max Lord - 60mph Max
Name: Changing Paths Rank: General Element: Air Range: 2 Meter Radius Description:
When an attack comes near Saito, he is able to alter the wind within his vicinity and redirect whatever is coming his way, be it an attack with a blade, or with a plethora of earth bended rocks. Basically by increasing the speed of the wind and turning away from him at the same time. Of course, certain objects may be too heavy to manipulate in time, but this is move is mainly meant to redirect the path of weapons and other projectiles rather than to deflect the elements. For instance someone brings a blade down to diagonally swipe at Saito, he can alter the wind around him slightly so that it goes around him just barely. The user can move during this, but that is optional.
Name: Flame's Bane Rank: Captian-Lord Element: Advanced Air Release II [Void] Range: Length of Sword Description:
Saito has used the void release, which is the ability to create an empty space that does not contain air. He creates the space around his blade, and then can proceed to "cut" fire. While not technically possible Saito can do this by "cutting" the fire with this space around the sword. Saito takes away the fuel for the flame and causes it to split to either side of the blade, essentially giving the appearance of it being cut, when in reality it just phases out of existence due to lack of air. The rank required must be equal to the rank of the flame.
Name: Piercing Sound Rank: Captain Element: Advanced Element I [Sound] Range: 6 Meters Description:
In order to use this technique, the user must first create a very distinct sound. For example, whistling, or the keening sound of a blade being drawn from a sheathe. Once the noise is created, Saito manipulates it so that it increases in pitch and at the same time directs it towards the ears of his target. The sound then infiltrates the ears and may cause migraines. It may even cause the ear drums to pop. The effects vary from person to person simply because everyone's ears are different.
Specialty Skills:
Name: Omniscient Specialty: Tactician Ability:
As a lord of the land, Saito has developed the ability to notice even the most mundane of facts about anything. Hardly anything fails to be noticed by his gaze, and because of that he is a very hard opponent to trick. His eyes are known to follow the muscle movements of another person, and can even predict where the person will go based upon that(see foresight). This trait also applies to politics. It can even translate to telling whether or not a person is lying to him. Despite the name, this trait does not make Saito infallible, and he has been known to be tricked in the past. This only lasts for two user posts, and then cannot be used until four user posts have passed.
Weapons:
Name: Akatsuki Appearance:
Akatsuki:
Range: 70.6 Centimeters Rank: Lord Special Abilities:
The Akatsuki is known for its sharpness, as well as its durability. It has the ability to withstand extreme direct heat, as well as cold, but not for extended periods of time. It is a very reliable blade. It is known to cut a small blade of grass without having to even move. The grass falling from the sky and landing on the blade is enough to cut the grass cleanly. Origin: See history
Name: Shinkirou Appearance:
Shinkirou:
Range: 55.2 Centimeters Rank: Lord Special Abilities: The Shinkirou is also known for its sharpness, as well as its durability. It has the ability to withstand extreme direct heat, as well as cold, but not for extended periods of time. It is a very reliable blade. It is known to cut a small blade of grass without having to even move. The grass falling from the sky and landing on the blade is enough to cut the grass cleanly. It is also natural for it to be the same as the Akatsuki, for they were made at the same time. Origin: See History
Name: Airbending Staff Appearance:
Shinkirou:
Range: 6'8" Total Length Rank: Recruit-Lord Special Abilities: It is most notably used as a mechanism in which Airbender's can maintain sustained flight for a period of time. It is also capable of use in combat, using the wings to send powerful bursts of air as well as simply waving the staff on its own. It is pretty resilient in nature, but like most things, it can be broken. Origin:See History
History and RP Sample:
History:
Saito's Story:
Harsh Beginnings.
It was a quiet and cool autumn’s night. The sky was without clouds and the moon was full. A breeze would pass by on occasion, turning the cool night to a cold one. The chill caused the families in their little buildings to cuddle closer to the fire, telling stories or sipping hot tea. In one particular little wooden home, a couple sat together upon a couch gazing down upon the face of their new born child. It was obvious that he would likely become a firebender, after all the father and mother were both firebenders. However, little to the father's knowledge the wife had fell in love with an Airbender nine months prior. It was genuine love, and not malicious in the sense that the wife was just spiting her husband. The airbender also did not have knowledge of the woman's current relationship status. It was on this night that the child was born, a child born Kiyosato, Sau by his "firebender father". However the mother did not join in upon the name giving process, because deep down she knew that the boy was not the firebenders. Obviously the "father" was confused by this, after all this was "their" son. Should not the mother be giving the name? Confused the firebender, whose name was Renji Kiyosato gazed at the woman, whose name was Tomoe Kiyosato (initially Hajime before marriage). She would flinch involuntary, instantly knowing that it was a mistake. Renji had anger issues, the smallest of transgressions sending him in to a rage. This of course was one of the reasons why Tomoe sought comfort from another man, a kinder man. Renji stood up, glaring at the woman whom he loved, yet could not comfort. He felt a burning rage within him that he could not squelch. Afraid for her newly born child, Tomoe sought to shield him. Of course this only enraged the man more. Now totally inflamed, fire came to life within his fist. At that moment, Tomoe brought fire of her own to bear, but it was not needed. For entering the room was the real father, Airbender Saito Hajime, a true airbender in looks and lifestyle. The mother was the woman with the violet hair, which would pass down to her son. During the short intermission that occurred as a result of the obvious confusion Saito's appearance would have, Tomoe wondered how he knew about her other life. How he had managed to show up at this opportune time. It was obvious...Saito had found out, and if he was mad, she could not tell. Apparently it did not matter, because he was here, and that was testament enough to her.
Soon the reverie would end, and everything would come crashing down. Within moments Renji lunged at Saito, hurling fire at the man. The airbender quickly dodged with deft movements that required no bending. Tomoe and the young infant cried out at the same time. Before Renji could turn around Saito had sent a large gust of wind behind him, tripping the man up. Saito would take up his lover, and his child and escort them out the window before turning to face the recovering Renji. The crazed man would snarl in rage, hurdling fire in a fierce stream that would cause bits of wood to catch fire...of course it would spread...later catching the entire house up on the blaze. Saito would not have to counter, for he had already made it out of the window. He was trying to help his family escape the crazed firebender. As they ran down the streets within the fire nation village Tomoe tried desperately to put the pieces together. Then it came to her that Renji's rage was not random..That he knew. It made sense after all, for she had not done anything. Her actions had just incensed his already inflated anger. When Renji had found out she would never know, nor would she have the chance at the moment because he was chasing them with the intent to kill. Saito, Renji, Tomoe, and the unnamed child ran down the alleyways within the village, three avoiding one. With Saito's help, they would manage to elude Renji for the moment. However Renji was an officer in the fire nation’s army..and Saito an air bender. It wouldn't be long before Renji twisted his government position to find Saito and the others. The sound of night watches being alerted permeated the air. "A Rogue Airbender" had taken a firenation woman hostage along with a child. It was a kill on sight; ask no questions ruling by a high ranking officer. There would not be any questions. They would come to a crossroads, a fire nation patrol passing by in the street before catching sight of Saito and the others. An awkward pause would occur as both parties stared at one another. However the pause would be broken first by the firebenders, who shot intense flames in their direction. Saito would react quickly, clapping his hands together to send a powerful concentrated burst of wind to disrupt their flames. The monk was confused, and with wild eyes would gaze at his young family. It was obvious that an end was near...nothing could be done..it seemed that all hope was gone. Sure he was a powerful bender, but against so many others of equal skill it would be hard. It was then though that Tomoe would stand up to help her true husband Saito, for she was a powerful Fire bender. Gently she would place the baby on the ground, being sure to place him behind the both of them.
Struggling to Survive
The epic show would begin as the elements of wind and fire danced around the night. The combatants moved around to intercept the oncoming elements. Two benders on four until the fifth arrived to the scene. Renji was the antagonist of the hour, his hair in disarray and his eyes wild. Of course, he would assume a more natural expression as he approached his fighting subordinates. This would create a momentary point of relief for Saito and Tomoe. All the while the little baby boy would cry, adding pressure to Saito's situation. Renji would step to the center of the circle within the village, cocky and arrogant as always. Infuriated, Tomoe yelled at her husband "Why are you doing this?!?! This is our child!!". Renji's cocky smile would vanish from his face as a dark look replaced it. "Our child? It is that filthy airbender's.. You're nothing but a dirty slut....I'm wasting my breath." and with that the battle would begin. It was a fruitless battle with five on two. It was obvious now that the couple would lose. The fire overwhelming them, coupled with the young baby boy's cries increasing in pitch; Saito understood that he would have to break his oath to save his family. That as an airbender he would have to take life in order to protect it. Saito would close his eyes, taking in a deep breath as the final stream of fire came at his family. Upon exhaling his eyes would open and the fire would cease to exist. The firebenders would step away from Saito in fear. Unknown to them, he was a master of the void release, one of the greatest weapons in airbending. Saito had learned it from the current leader of the airnation, and one of his closest friends. Renji and the others would take steps back, but out of fear for their lives they would attempt to firebend, but nothing would occur. It was then that they noticed they could not breathe...the air was gone. How could that be possible? surely Saito would feel these same affects, how could he be alive? Stricken by fear they were too foolish to move, and so they died from being "strangulated". Saito relished the power he had unleashed, but in his arrogance he failed to realize Renji was not dead. Upon walking over to the corpse to find anything that may protect his family, the crazed firebender shot fire at Saito, hitting him squarely in the chest. All of his clothing caught fire, which was put out instantly. In a fit of rage Saito lunged at Renji and they fought wildy. In his rage Saito forgot his most basic of martial arts. In the scuffle Renji managed to pull out the blade "Akatsuki", a very valuable blade taken by the corrupt firebender from a traveling samurai. During the scuffle Tomoe went to check upon their child, stricken between helping her lover..and her motherly instincts, upon grasping her child and turning around she would witness her lover being impaled.
Some people just start at zero
Tomoe would scream out in horror, her heart tearing in to pieces as Saito's blood pooled at the ground. Howling like a wild beast she ran over to the scene, her child in hand. Enraged beyond reason she raised her fist high in the sky as she sent a fist full of flames directly in to Renji's skull, unleashing the weight of her agony down upon her now dead mortal enemy. She would fall to her knees, bringing the head of her loved one to rest upon her thighs. Saito would gaze up in to her eyes as tears fell down on to his face. As if on cue, Saito's baby son began to cry. Saito would look up at the sky, tears in his eyes as well as he realized he would not be able to see his son grow up. Tomoe would bring the child to Saito, he would proceed to carry his son as his blood drained from his body. "I name him...after me...Hajime...Saito......shall be his name." without arguing the mother simply shook her head from side to side in dismay as the father went rigid, death grasping hold.
Life After
Hajime Saito the second would grow up to be a great airbender. The journey was definitely rough, but when there is a will there is a way. Tomoe, shortly after Saito's father's death, fled the firenation with her son. With a memento from his father, Saito and his mom would be allowed to live within the Eastern Air Temple. Of course there was some resentment about Saito's mother, but Airbender's were more forgiving, more understanding. It was their teachings that made them that way. Soon life would move on and the young Saito would begin to Airbend. There he would begin his training as an Airbender. It was rough at first, the young boy fiery like his mother in nature. However he would calm down in his later youth, having friends of his father influencing him. Still being a kid though, the young Saito once attempted to steal the Air Monk's glider staff. Always wanting to have one, but never getting one. Saito envied it and so he decided that he would take one for himself. He took it but was caught by the Airmonk. Expecting to be reprimanded, Saito was surprised that the Air Monk smiled at him and shooed Saito away. Upon saito's birthday, a staff was given to him by his mother from the Air Monk himself.
Growing up throughout the years it was obvious that Saito was different. Having hair, no tattoo, and a personality that was far different than the Airmonks were used to. Saito loved to use swords, something he picked up during his travels to the Firenation. Now fifteen, he often left the Eastern Air temple to explore the world on his own. An accomplished bender, Tomoe wasn't really worried about him too often. Saito was already considered exceptional, already well on his way to advancing the element (a journeyman at this age). However, Saito would lose focus of his bending and become more focused upon using weapons. Of course he still bended, it was in his blood. But a new hobby stole him away from the Airmonk's and their principles. It was on his sixteenth birthday that Saito was given the Akatsuki..the sword that killed his father. Saito did not know this at the time and was very grateful to his mother. Also, he was given Shinkirou, the wakizashi that went with Akatsuki. At seventeen Saito would kill his first man. A young firebender who had opted to spar with Saito. Things had gotten out of hand, it was the firebgender's fault, but Saito was ashamed..and even digusted. He loved people as a whole and to take life was revolting to him. It was then that the realization came to him. That the arts of combat were not for sport, that the delusion that they could be used for fun was simply a result of his youth and naivety. Annoyed and infuriated Saito stormed off and left the Air Temples for two years.
Things happen fast
During those two years Saito did a lot of soul searching, exploring each nation and making friends and enemies along the way. He honed himself mentally and physically. It was at this age that he began to experiment with the second evolution of his airbending, but it was not quite there, something was missing. Saito would return to the Eastern air temple to find that his mother had died of some unknown disease. Saito mourned her death for several weeks before moving on, somewhat scarred by the fact that he had scorned his mother for two years. It wasn't even of any fault of her own. That was something Saito wanted to tell her, but would never be able to do. He was just...growing up, and doing that had cost him something, and Saito didn't think that the price was worth the reward. The old air monk from his childhood had passed away due to age, and the process for selecting the new monk was going to begin. Saito was still not mature enough to do it, but now that his mother was gone he wanted to know if it was worth it, he also wanted to make the time he spent away from his mom worth it. This chance would make amends, at least the only way he knew how to repent. Saito would ascend in two more years, becoming very wise and cunning..practically a totally different person. At the age of twenty three he would be made the leader of the Air Nation.
Rp Sample:
Note: Old post from ingoo...that means its all battle and boring.
Seraph had bartered passage upon a commerce boat to enter the village of Kirigakure, using the sailors purpose as his own. He would assimilate the role of a sailor as he changed clothing to match the others. His long black hair tied off in to a pony tail, the bangs upon his face slicked back so that his forehead would not have strands of hair upon them. Long sleeved gray shirts, with matching slacks. The material loose fitting and water proof. Underneath though, he still wore his all black clothing which made him look bigger than he actually was. As the boat pulled in to the docks, he would be working hard, sweat on his brow as he pulled vigorously at the ropes of the sails, drawing them in so the boat could be tied off at the docks. Once done, he would stand up straight, eying the docks he would see the tough security. The boat would gently coast its way the final distance, the other four men on the docks smiling happily for having survived the wretched trip. Seraph would smile at the men, using his skills at playing the role to simply get in with them, making himself a part of this little buddy buddy fiasco. There would be a slight nudge that rocked the boat, signifying it had hit the dock. One of the men would get off, foot on the edge of the ship and then would place the other on the dock. The rope in hand he would tie it secure on the pier. With that, it was a coming of the end, for Seraph had only worked on the ship so that he could get a free ride. He would thank the men with waves, some with private words and handshakes. With that he would step off the boat, on to the deck within the walls of the Water Country and begin to enter. Many villagers and other traders along the route, talking and trading, it was a busy day, making it hard for anyone to suddenly discern him from a crowd and deem him suspicious for actions he had yet to commit. Of course, that was such wishful thinking as he would notice the group of guards ready to check him and his comrades before he could make it to the traders area. Of course, his plan was simply to tell the truth, he was a fishermen with these men and they were willing to back him up. Seraph was very good at acting. He would girn, thinking about the goodbyes he had given. It was amusing considering it was so premature, after all they were all standing together now, five men in total including Seraph. This would be the cause of the odd grins upon each mans face as they all looked at one another.
Last edited by Saito on Fri Apr 20, 2012 1:09 am; edited 2 times in total
Saito Lord
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Subject: Re: Redone: Saito Hajime - Air Monk Thu Apr 19, 2012 1:51 am
- Done
Iris Lord
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Subject: Re: Redone: Saito Hajime - Air Monk Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:26 am
ok to start things off
first put things like history in spoilers so its more neat looking, thats is just cosmetic stuff
second SC-foresight this is a bit over powered to be able to predict another characters movements before they perform it. i know you explained its not always right and stuff, but still elaborate on it a bit more so it doesnt seem that you can see what everyone does as soon as they do it.
third Tech-The wind dance reduce the speed you can move at each rank, and give us a range on how far you can move at a max with each dodge and how often this can be done
fourth Tech-changing paths do you also move when you use air bending to dodge the attack?
fifth Spec-omniscient same thing with foresight, the predicting of someones moves you need to elaborate on
sixth your history was amazing. Right when your chars air bending father was stabbed, the drop came on the song and it was so amazing. i got chills man.
fix these things and i will look back over it
Saito Lord
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Subject: Re: Redone: Saito Hajime - Air Monk Fri Apr 20, 2012 12:57 am
Edited, and thank you.
Iris Lord
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Subject: Re: Redone: Saito Hajime - Air Monk Fri Apr 20, 2012 1:11 am
1/2 approval
now we wait for soul to approve
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Subject: Re: Redone: Saito Hajime - Air Monk Fri Apr 20, 2012 1:48 am
