Avatar RPG
Welcome to AvatarP. A Avatar based RPG. There are many fun adventures awaiting you, but you first must register. Take a moment to look around, see if AvatarP grabs your interest, then begin your journey by registering.

Avatar RPG

The four nations: Water, Earth, Fire, and Air. Come join and start your own journey as a bender, weapon user, or a common cabbage vendor. Welcome to Avatar RPG!
 
HomeFAQSearchUsergroupsMemberlistRegisterLog in


Latest topics
» Greetings!
Wed Jun 03, 2015 8:35 pm by Nerdeity

» Attack on Titan RP
Wed Jun 03, 2015 3:16 pm by Guest

» .hack//Infinity
Tue Nov 04, 2014 7:47 am by Guest

» Moderators are being hired! Act now!
Mon Jul 07, 2014 6:23 pm by Faecous

» Bordertown, An Elfside Story [Jcink]
Tue Jul 01, 2014 2:55 pm by Guest

» Natsu Dragneel Role Play
Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:04 pm by Guest

» Amortentia [Animation Personified]
Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:16 pm by Guest

» WASTED SENTIMENTS, a unique dystopian w/ a modern monarchy
Thu Apr 17, 2014 9:22 pm by Guest

» + Second Pass Weyr | AU 18+ Canon Pern RPG [SMF]
Sun Apr 13, 2014 12:21 am by Guest

» Jinsei RP [A Naruto based forum]
Wed Apr 09, 2014 6:30 pm by Guest

Administrators


Head Admin Iris
Lead Admin Nikki

Graphic Design


NEEDED

Level One Moderators


Isan

Level Two Moderators



Mori
Affiliate With Us




<a href="http://avatarp.forumotion.com/?tid=8bf8b50840686511c809c4ae59165acc" class="postlink"><img src="http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif" border="0" alt="" />

<a href="http://avatarp.forumotion.com/?tid=8bf8b50840686511c809c4ae59165acc" class="postlink"><img src="http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1588/87513493.png" border="0" alt="" />


<a href="http://avatarp.forumotion.com/?tid=8bf8b50840686511c809c4ae59165acc" class="postlink"><img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/3383/60105011.png" border="0" alt="" />

Our Affiliates Bleach Story Role-Play Naruto - Warring States Rosario Highschool

Share | 
 

 Fire Empress Zaag

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Nikki Z
Lord
Lord
avatar

Posts : 83
Join date : 2013-08-25
Age : 21
Location : Florida

PostSubject: Fire Empress Zaag   Sun Aug 25, 2013 2:38 am

Basic Character Information:

Name: Nikki Zaagman
Age: 18
Title: Empress Zaag
Gender: Female

Looks:
Nikki:
 
Formal Wear:
 
Combat Uniform:
 
The combat uniform is the same, except she keeps the helmet on a golden string tied tightly to her hip. She normally doesn't wear any makeup and trys not to over do things and keeps them low key. However when she is in formal wear she makes sure she looks as beautiful as possible. When she wears military uniform her large breast are extremely noticeable and you can tell what her gender is.
Personality: Nikki is normally a calm and cool personal. She isn't one to be overprotective and angry. She is very calm cool and collected. However she does have her spikes of anger. Sometimes its even said, that she will roast a man alive for disobeying orders. She can be very angry and furious when this happens. Other then that she is very cool and not one to rush to battle. When she goes through things on a daily bases she is very abrupt and short. She has a strong anger towards regular people and thinks they are useless and shouldn't even be given life. They are pointless and 100% useless in her eyes. She understands they are needed but detest them.


Rank Information:

Rank: Lord/King
Nation: Fire Empire
Organization: N/a
Bending Element: Fire/Lightining/Lava
Specialty: Athlete

Skill Information:

Special Characteristics:

SC:
 


Techniques:

Fire Bending:
 

Lightining Manipulation:
 

Lava Bending:
 


Specialty skills:


Name: Acrobatic
Specialty: Athlete
Ability:
Athletes are fast, quick and extremely agile. They are good at jumping around the battle field and out running their opponents. They have increased speed and agility, making them hard to catch and keep up with.

Name: Flexibility
Specialty: Athlete
Ability: Zaag is even more flexible than normal for Fire Nation Natives. Her bones, primarily around joints, are hard to outright break. They can still be sprained or fractured by a force that would break someone else’s bones, however, and twice the normal force is required to break them. Because of this extra flexibility, she is also capable of escaping shackles and bindings that would hold even the most slippery person.




Pet/Animal:


Type: Pet
Name: Zazu
Species: Dragon
Element: Lava
Appearance:
Looks:
 
Description: The dragon is one that shoots flames and is a almighty and powerful dragon. It listens solely to its master and worries little for anything else.  
Special Abilities:
Fire Breath- The dragon can shooting flames, the element fires out and can light anything on fire in its path.
Fire Proof- They are fire proof in general. Otherwise the damage the dragon will receive will be kinetic.
Size- Due to the 30 (38 feet from tail to head) foot dragon standing tall, its durability and amount it can take is huge.
Dragon Scales- The dragon scales provide defense against any weapons a enemy would use, from cannonballs to spears. Although cannonballs damage the dragon, its not enough to kill or break through skin. Its like being hit by a powerful BB gun.
Flight- The dragons flight can reach speeds up to 100 mph and max out at 300 mphs.
Origin:
The dragons origins are unknown. At her 18th birthday it appeared before her and gave it loyalty to her. Its loyalty is to the Fire Empress or who ever is in lead of the Fire Nation.
Weapons:


Name: Fire Blade
Appearance:
Looks:
 
When the swords metal is gone, the blade will keep its shape but turn into a hot molding lava.
Range: 3 feet
Rank:
Special Abilities: Extremely strong sword, allows user to heat the blade and cut through other blades with extreme heat. This is done by the core of the blade is lava. The metal around it is thin and extremely strong. The lave inside heats up and makes the blade extremely hot. If the blade itself is chipped the lava can simply replace it. This makes the blade much more deadly. The core that allows this is built into the hilt.
Origin: This sword has been passed down from Fire Lord to Fire lord. It is now in Nikki hands and will be used for doom.

History
History:
Birth Arc

At birth she was nothing more then a little baby born into a a poor family. She wasn't capable of achieving anything in life. Born into a civilian family and not expected of much is were she'd start. Her family that simply tended to cattle and farm. By the time that she was 3, she was able to make puffs of fire and her parents hadn't found out yet. As they were heavy against benders and even at such a young age she already understood in her community not to come out.
Youth Arc

As she was 5, she began to understand something odd about her life. She'd go through the daily bore of what they called life and laugh at the sillyness and rules imposed on them. It seemed the entire society was built on oppression of people. She keep this understand and showed her capability to no one. She didn't want to tell anyone, or anything towards her bending. She wasn't even sure if her parents were her real ones. She waited year after year until one day when she was 12. A group of solider came to town and began to search through all the kids and bulled and fought with them. They were looking through the entire country for a girl of 12. Each one of them was stood before a line and the benders would go up to each and fire a fire ball at each one. Each one would be slammed at each girl and kill them. She was in total fear, as the ball fired at her. She returned to the training she'd do in secret in the woods. As the ball came to her she'd flip it into the sky. The guards were pleased, they'd found what they wanted. Soon she was locked in strange chains and taken away. She remembers a large black hood being thrown over her head and a slam to the back. When she awoke she found a strange group of people poking and proding her. "This is her, right were you said she was. The princess here of all places. The Lord must have been very scared to send her away like that. Which squad brought her in?" a womens voice said. "Toki Death Squad." a man said. "What why were they sent?" she spoke in anger. After that she was began to be treated like a princess and heavy lesson in sued.

Teen Arc

At 13 she hadn't yet been told of why she was being treated like this. She missed her parents and missed her friends. She wanted to go back, but instead heavy studding and fire fighting insued. By the time she was 14, she'd already mastered the first advanced element of lighting. They were extremely impressed with her ability. After years more of this training, she began to come into her own and form her own ideas about the nation. The longer she was with them, the more they pressed running a nation. By the time she was 16, the Fire Lord died of old age. She would now be surrounded by advisers running the nation. A year later and she finished her schooling beating even the most powerful Fire User in the country. She had now mastered her second element. For the next year she'd spend her time in schooling and finishing it. She had now turned 18 and no longer the Regency Council has in control. She took control with a iron grip and installed a empire. Then changed the name from Fire Nation to the Empire of Fire. She then proceed to install many old rights and began to gear up for war. She also revoked her right from the council and stopped attending the few meeting she had gone to. She made no prepartions to fight, but prepared the nation to a military-industrial complex. This had made the Empire very uneasy with the other Nations. She now announced a new charter of rights for all men of the fire nation. She was ushering in a new stage of military enlightenment. A odd thing never tried before.


Last edited by Nikki Z on Wed Aug 28, 2013 12:55 am; edited 6 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Iris
Lord
Lord
avatar

Posts : 129
Join date : 2011-05-06
Age : 32
Location : Where ever you want me...

PostSubject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag   Mon Aug 26, 2013 9:57 pm

up the looks and personality

being a master swordsman and a master bender is no. so nerf the sword skills and what not

nerf the dragon down some. even for dragons, its OP. so edit these things and then i shall review
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://avatarp.forumotion.com
Nikki Z
Lord
Lord
avatar

Posts : 83
Join date : 2013-08-25
Age : 21
Location : Florida

PostSubject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag   Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:36 pm

Changed
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Iris
Lord
Lord
avatar

Posts : 129
Join date : 2011-05-06
Age : 32
Location : Where ever you want me...

PostSubject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag   Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:38 pm

mental telepathy, no

flight faster than hell, no

fire proof, make it general

the keen sense of smell is just random and doesnt seem to fit well with dragons in how they really function, so provide reasoning, or remove it
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://avatarp.forumotion.com
Nikki Z
Lord
Lord
avatar

Posts : 83
Join date : 2013-08-25
Age : 21
Location : Florida

PostSubject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag   Mon Aug 26, 2013 11:03 pm

Fixed
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Iris
Lord
Lord
avatar

Posts : 129
Join date : 2011-05-06
Age : 32
Location : Where ever you want me...

PostSubject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag   Mon Aug 26, 2013 11:25 pm

note the flames of the dragon are that of a captain

approved

enjoy dat rp
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://avatarp.forumotion.com
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag   

Back to top Go down
 
Fire Empress Zaag
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Avatar RPG :: Creations Center :: Character Creation :: Approved Characters :: Fire Nation-
Jump to: